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Post  {E.M. Wuz X} on Tue Jun 05, 2012 1:42 pm

Naw, but can you rate these...


Too much to say, so I put it on paper
This way, my thoughts lay, to be used for later
Maybe for music, do I really choose it
Keep God in my mind so I don't lose it
Tree made me stupid, from smokin it everyday
Thought I could get away, with doing anything
But you can't make the rules, or consequences
Act a fool, then you get detention
Talk about recession, like poor aint poor
Rich aint rich, war aint war
Well that's all a lie when you barely get by
See a kid cry when they cut off the lights
Everyday plight, everyday grind
Scream fuck life, then shut down yo mind
Look back in time, at the past you hated
Lifes a bitch, so I cope by blazein
Then start drinkin, then stop thinkin
Pop some pills just to sleep this evenin
Need to get real, face your demons
Mind at ease then, feeling even

{hook which I haven't finished}

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Post  ? on Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:05 pm

I LIKE THAT!......AND IT MADE SENSE

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Post  {E.M. Wuz X} on Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:06 pm

MARCUS wrote:I LIKE THAT!......AND IT MADE SENSE

Thanks and glad your on the site

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Post  IceE on Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:16 pm

Very good. Your rap is so much more organized than mine are lol.
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Post  {E.M. Wuz X} on Tue Jun 05, 2012 9:19 pm

IceE wrote: Very good. Your rap is so much more organized than mine are lol.

My room=dead opposite. In my plain view there are three mountain dew bottles, a few candy rappers and a cigarrete butt. That's in my face, not just in my view.

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